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hi!I'm Zhao Ziwen. I was a happy boy.BecauseI had a happy family.but,I'm very very sad now.Why?Because my dad isn't health. he drinks alcohol every day.he is angry every day.My mom is sad,too.So I grow up can't drink alcohol,I can't! I'm only 13 old,but I'm clever.I have a noble dream! I want go America!I want to go 武汉治疗癫痫医院to havord!I'm confident!HaHa! My birthday is in July. I love building blocks.My favorite food is hamburger! I want have a look the world.The very very large world!

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Hi! I'm Zhao Ziwen.My birthday is in July. I love building blocks. My favorite food is 吃药期间癫痫会发吗e="color: #ff0000">hamburgers!

I was a happy boybecause I had a happy family.But I'm very very sad now.Why?Because my dad isn't healthy.He drinks alcohol every day.哈尔滨有几个治疗癫痫病的医院yle="color: #ff0000">He is angry every day.My mom is sad,too. I won't drink alcohol when I grow up. I won't!

I'm only 13 years old, but I'm clever. I have a noble dream! I want to go to America!I北京军海癫痫病医院举办6.28国际癫痫关爱日癫痫诊疗云会诊 want to go to Harvard! I'm confident! HaHa!

I want have a look the world. The very very large world!

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